Categories > Original > Poetry

Secrets

by Miss_Saint_Jimmy 1 Reviews

"I don't think I can take much more..." constructive criticism is greatly appreciated!

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG - Genres: Drama - Characters:  - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2012/09/20 - Updated: 2012/09/21 - 142 words - Complete

Reviews

  • Secrets

    (#) scarlett_fitch2027 2012-09-20 10:58:03 PM

    Aw diddums! Sad and enigmatic, I like it a lot. Nice language as well, just be careful because some lines don't fit in with the whole rhythm of the poem and it sounds slightly off. But good job! :)

    SF

Log in!




Register Lost password

Filter

You won't see stories with a lower score when you browse or search. Log in to adjust filter.
0

 

Featured Story

Site Stats

  • Authors: 199460
  • Stories: 39229

Recent Stories

Site design Copyright 2005, K&D Lynch. All stories contained in this archive are the property of their respective authors, and the owners of this site claim no responsibility for their contents.

Page created in 0.0161 seconds