A new boy in Ritsuka's class causes him to reflect on his relationship with those around him.
- Nice, I liked how you handled serious issues without quite going into depressing. Your Soubi dialogue seemed a little awkward, though, mainly the way he kept using Ritsuka's name. Maybe we read different translations? Using ** for flashback dialogue was a bit weird, but it worked, and I liked way you arranged the story and the concept of Mizuki.