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20. Fight

Why did I bite down my nails? I could do so much more damage if they were longer.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres:  - Characters: Frank Iero - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2012/09/23 - Updated: 2012/09/25 - 1625 words

Reviews

• Our Lips Touch

  (#) BulletproofNinja 2012-09-24 02:27:36 AM

  Oh my god, NUUUUUUU!!!!!
  FRONKEH CAN'T DIE!!!!
  Please update soon? I need to know what happens!
  So good, I love this story.
  ~BulletproofNinja xo

  Author's response

  i updated go see what happen X)
  
  Thank you for the comment.

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  (#) ilovefrankieieroxx 2012-09-24 02:39:54 AM

  NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!! FRANKIE DON'T DIE!!!!
  
  I'm in the middle of scinece and I almost cried seriously!
  
  Damn you and your clever cliff hangers!! Damn you!
  
  Update soon!
  
  Rosie :)

  Author's response

  awwww don't cry ~hugs you~. why are you reading my story in science class? :)
  
  i do a lot of cliff hangers, don't I? sorry XD
  
  thank you for the comment.

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  (#) jessloui 2012-09-24 04:18:49 AM

  OH GOSH OH GOSH OH GOSH PLEASE DONT LET HIM DIE

  Author's response

  XD breathe, just calm down and breathe..every thing is going to be ok.
  
  XD thanks for the comment.

• Our Lips Touch

  (#) RockMusic 2012-09-24 09:22:02 AM

  HE CAN NOT DIE!!!!!!!!
  HE CAN NOT DIE!!!!!!!!
  HE CAN NOT FUCKING DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!
  FUCK NO! HELL TO THE FUCK TO THE NO! This fucking shit is not fucking happening. Shit. What the fuck?! No, not my Frankie. Not my fucking Frank. No. Frerard without Fr is erard... Erard is not a thing... THIS IS NOT HAPPENING

  Author's response

  O.0 It's all going to be ok...hey wait a minuet have you returned Frankie back to imakilljoywannabe?
  
  we all know you stole him and threaten to feed killjoy247's blood to Frank if they didn't continue their fanfic 'I Want Your Bite'
  
  ... you have some explaining to do XD (but don't worry i still love ya..in a non creepy way)
  
  thank you for the comment.

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  (#) DaniAtaDisco 2012-09-24 01:32:56 PM

  blood curdling scream NNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! F*CK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FRANKIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  
  okay back to normal... well as normal as a ghost can be... great story!!! update soon yes?

  Author's response

  ...i think i'm deaf from that blood curdling scream...
  
  thank you for the comment.

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  (#) BLEEDINontheFLOOR 2012-09-25 05:09:35 PM

  FRANK KEEP BREATHING! STAY ALIVE! STAAYYYYY ALIVEEEE!
  Update soon?

  Author's response

  Ah, ha, ha, ha, stayin alive, stayin alive.
  
  Ah, ha, ha, ha, stayin alive.
  
  XD I've updated. thank you for the comment.

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  (#) LadyNinja 2012-09-25 07:23:24 PM

  OOOOOH bulletproof ninja I AM A NINJA
  Okay okay on an unrelated note
  Instead of gasps you said gaps
  Also
  GOOD STORY

  Author's response

  yay thank you for that, i've fixed it now :)
  
  
  thank you for the comment.

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  (#) MissFilthyDivineMCR 2012-09-26 12:22:31 PM

  OH GOD, I'm sorry I haven't read sooner, but.... HOLY SHIT! I agree with everyone, HE CAN'T DIE!!! You MUST update soon because I'm dying to know what happens next! That sounds like an AWESOME tattoo by the way! :D Umm, I was kind of thinking of getting tattoos along the lines of MCR and Lady Gaga. :)) Maybe like quotes or symbols, but idk for now. One day though! :P But, yes, I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! You write really good fighting scenes. Honestly! :D Alright, going to review your author's note update!
  Love, Sabrina XOXO
  ~Stay Beautiful, Keep It Ugly~

  Author's response

  Yay thank you, I love my tattoo. only get a tattoo if you know that no matter what happens in your life you will still love it in many years to come. I'm getting tattoos of things that will never change (I'm always going to be AUS, i can't change that).
  
  but if there is a quote or something that you completely agree with or that is inspirational to you and means something to you and you know that it is always something that will never change for you then do it...but don't do anything unless your 100% sure. (don't ever get names of boyfriends or girlfriends.)
  
  anyway back to the story.
  
  Awww you really liked my fighting scenes? XD(YAY)
  
  thank you for the comment.

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