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15 ReviewsHarry was sent to Azkaban and was later found to be innocent. With the help of Ron, he will find out who his true friends are. Will he forgive those who betrayed him? Will he be able to let the wor...
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Flames of Betrayal
(#) LIFE_GOOD_HP 2006-07-16 06:06:39 PM
yoiu should really try to update your chapter on your website too. but otherwise hurry and let hermione get shot down for betraying harry. great story. -
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(#) Karen 2006-08-07 07:01:07 AM
I really love this. Please keep it going and update really soon. I love the web you've woven. Thanks. -
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(#) anaknisatanas 2006-08-17 09:00:24 PM
wow, i'm stunned. this is a very well put together plot and very interesting read. i love it! i hope you update soon and regularly. Harry is great and i like his relationship with Ron, Snape and Sirius. i hope he eventually mends fences with Remus so they are close again and I really like Dobby, he's so awesome in this story. -
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(#) Sennia 2006-09-15 11:55:44 PM
This story is the whole reason why I've made an account with this site! It's wonderful and I just love the way you've convincingly portrayed Albus Dumbledore as a sort of "root of all evil." It gives an interesting spin on the story line and I love the interactions between the characters.
I especially love the way you've made Dobby an important character. I don't think he gets near enough credit in the books, let alone in the world of fanfiction.
I hope you continue with this soon and I look forward to reading more! -
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(#) Cateagle 2006-10-15 08:21:38 PM
This is getting to be quite the interesting story. I wonder who the Moody that killed Neville really is? Good thing Hermione saved the body. A few thoughts:
1 - Have Peter & Trelaney meet at Hogwarts while both are in animagus form; Peter sounds like he might be looking for a way out of Moldieshort's service and he could provide some important info; though with Harry and 2 other Marauders around, he'd definitely be paying for his survival.
2 - I wonder if Tom saved any blood or tissue samples from his original body? It'd be interesting if Harry contacted him for a truce and asked for such to use with a sample of Dumbeldore's blood for a muggle-done DNA comparison to verify what his grandfather found. Imagine the reaction of Voldy to that.
3 - You have to wonder how long before the Weaseley's wake up and realize just how they've been used. Heh, can you imagine their reaction to getting a letter from Perce and Ron?
Keep up the good work! -
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(#) DavidMPotter 2007-06-16 02:28:06 PM
Awesome fic. It is now one of my favorites -
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(#) kreacher 2008-03-11 06:30:49 PM
great story i am loving this fic, dumbledore is truely truely evil, still trying to work out who the fake moody was, i doubt it will be obvious or it just could be, my first thought was dumbledore (the evil one) then once hermione killed him, i had second thoughts and thought pettigrew but i am not certain of that, can't wait for you to update, the suspense is killing me