New 5/10 And better grammar! “Hmm, no.” Blackie laughed lightly. “I got the best out of you already. You need a challenge. That’s your problem. You thrive on challenges and being the under ...
(#) shadowvt125 2013-02-14 08:35:20 AMAh, so glad you’re back! First: I’m enjoying this immensely!
I love your tale from the root on.
The setting, the cast (…Nikki, Blackie, Izzy …even Chris has his appearance ) your characterizations (for one Izzy isn’t just the plain guy, pinning over whomever*, your Nikki* and even your Slash), the twists and turns: You know how to pull the strings for sure!
Please keep it up – I’ll stay tuned!
*You know your G n’R, don’t you?
** Sigh… evil motherfucker on one hand, decadent and rotten to the core… on the other hand yet so tender and fragile, just a lovable misfit.
* he’s pinning anyway… but how! And the dumpster thing….
Author's responseBack in Black! lol. But seriously your review seriously made my entire week so much better. And glad you liked Chris as well as all my characterizations. Chris worked so well in the plot, you know? :)
- While I am still here:
WHAT A MONSTER!
Gave me pleasant shivers and goosebumps while reading!
(One or two times I needed a pillow to hide ;).
Again FAR (far away) from PREDICTABLE
and the ordinary ff-stufffluff!
Hope you pick it up again someday.
Sat another alert - just in case!
Author's responseI'm elated that you read this story. This is actually my first ever slash fanfic I ever wrote. And you enjoyed it, Woo!!!:D I am working on the next chapter, so hopefully there will be more soon. Thanks for giving it a shot