“I couldn't survive without you.”Slash whispered into Axl's ear, his arms locking around his waist....
- I loved it, I really could break down the thought and feeling of slash and now I understand more because not left axl .. reading the story can be seen as gradually axl been relying more on slash .. I admire as you describe those thoughts and feelings in a way that does not look messy or incoherent and also how you do to slash someone patient and careful to come to him from a safe .. my computer is not working properly so I could not use much google translator, English is not my native language so sorry if you do not understand a lot! :) .. I read in another chapter!
Author's responseThanks, i really appreciate your reviews that you leave. I try to add as much description i can when i'm writing Axl, he is very hard to describe. I understand your writing well, you have great English. :) Hope you enjoy the rest!!