Have started rewriting this story.Read how Harry Potter, or should I say Orion Black is being brought up the pureblood way by Sirius Black, his family. Good Voldemort! Dark, Political and Powerful ...
- Nice start. There are clear formatting issues with this chapter such as lack of spacing and paragraphs. Interesting twists with the characters, compared with Canon which have left me looking forward to more and seeing where you take this.