(#) valeria941012 2012-10-06 09:59:51 PMI love it! There are not many stories about Erin, and this is sad because she was a very important part of our favorite singer's life. I always want to know more about her, and the way you portrayed her is great. Pleaaaaase continue. I'll be waiting :)
Author's responseWow, this is one of the best comments I've ever gotten. Thanks, doll :) And I totally agree with you about the whole Erin stories. She was such an important figure in Guns' history, yet no one seems to write stories about her. A real sad thing. I actually got inspired to write this while listening to 'Jennifer's Body' by Hole and reading Slash's autobiography. I was at the part where he was talking about Erin and thought, "Hey, some of the lyrics in this song goes so perfectly well with their relationship, why not write something about it?" Anyway, thanks sooooooo much. You're comment is really sparked up my creativity and inspiration! I'll get writing right now!!
(#) valeria941012 2012-10-08 11:13:32 PMYou're hungry, but I'm starving
He cuts you down from the tree
He keeps you in a box by the bed
Alive, but just barely
He said, "I'm your lover, I'm your friend"
I'm pure and he hits me again
Now I know where did you get the tittle, which is great btw. When I read your response to the first comment I was like: no way in hell I'm going to let her give up with this story, so it's great you decided to continue. Update soon :)
Author's responseLol, when I read the first line of your comment I was like, "What is this person quoting?" Then I read the next few lines and I was like, "Oh my God! This is so awesome and sweet!" I'm actually using a lot of Hole songs for chapter titles because I just feel if Erin was to be a singer she would be singing those lyrics. sigh God, Courtney Love can pen a song perfectly. And thanks so much. I just finished the second chapter, but it's still currently in the editing process because I'm trying to get a more background thing for Erin. But don't worry, the next few chapters won't disappoint ;)
P.S. I always seem to rant when I get these comments. That shows you gave a great one :D
(#) axlroseiscool 2012-10-09 06:03:11 PMY u no update?! I love it already!
Author's responseBe patient young ones. I've already finished one chapter, I just to finish this one I'm currently working on. I want to post two chapters so by the tommorow they'll be up along with chapter pictures!! Thanks, glad you liked it :D