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lol ok

erm hahahah

Category: Panic! At The Disco - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama - Characters:  - Warnings: [R] - Published: 2012/10/17 - Updated: 2012/10/17 - 638 words - Complete

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• lol ok

  (#) Mirazal 2012-10-17 04:38:57 PM

  Wait....... wut.
  
  Okay it was random but I'm gonna rant a little okay I live near Dallas and PTV is in Dallas TONIGHT but I CAN'T GOOOOOOO
  
  -heart breaks-

• lol ok

  (#) DanFrancisco 2012-10-24 05:38:44 AM

  The story was a bit jumpy and could do with proofreading, but I loved this. It was so adorable and it holds a great message :) reminds me of me and my friend. I never had a brother or sister, so she's like my little sister and we've always been like that. She beat up a guy for me once.
  But yeah, this was awesome and you have great potential with your writing style, like the first couple of lines were absolutely amazing. It just jumped a little after that :)

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