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Give It Your Best Shot
(#) mrpietan 2012-11-04
I'm enjoying the story very much, and I look forward to the next chapter.Author's response
Thank you for reviewing. :)Give It Your Best Shot
(#) ibskib 2012-11-09
Oh Well, it would probably have been too boring for him to just pick up a Horcrux without any struggle. And on that note, onw of the things I think works well is how Porteur, a powerful fighter, is forced to make do with the younger Harry's weaker body, hopefully it will lead to fights where he will try to win the day by using his intellect, instead of just blowing things up.Give It Your Best Shot
(#) lleon 2013-08-06
Porteus definitely seems to very knowledgeable about a lot of magic, especially Soul magic and how it would carry through dimensions.
Seems he has an uphill task ahead of him, trying to send back switch back his soul to his real body and get teen Harry back where he belongs.
I didn't understand the sudden jarring cutaways to the pickpocket Jeremy Adams, who is he and why did he suddenly show up in the 2nd last para?
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