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The Rituals and the Cure
3 ReviewsI wrote this for my event, the Poetry to Stories challenge. -Adnarim Smada
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The Rituals and the Cure
(#) atomickilljoy 2012-11-04 03:45:36 PM
-loud, unnecessary applause-
BEAUTIFUL! -
The Rituals and the Cure
(#) Mirazal 2012-11-04 03:45:39 PM
Wow... that metaphor...
This was really good. It sets up an interesting situation and tells a story despite its short length.
The way you talkes about their toxic relationship as a cycle was awesome.
I liked this. -
The Rituals and the Cure
(#) OhmyGee 2012-11-04 03:57:22 PM
Seriously awesome.
I really enjoyed reading.
It was just so good!!!