A meeting of minds.
(#) Shadowdrake 2012-11-10 02:20:08 AMThe story is really becoming quite interesting and innovative. Well done.
The one thing that automatically came to my mind during the discussion are Horcrux. A horcrux is a part of a soul; so would it be possible to create a rift between the two Harry's and move one into a horcrux - and then put that part into an animated body?
Author's responseThanks, I'm glad that you think so.
As for you question...well, you'll have to continue reading. :)
- OK. This is a great story, however I feel that these next few chapters are going to be make it or break it for this story. In my not experienced authors mind I feel that a good direction to go would be a magically constructed body for Peurter to inhabit, utilizing some form of anchor to keep the construct stable. Like a ring, pendent, or even a gem embedded in his chest, like a heart. Like I said I'm not an experienced author, but I have seen a few stories were something similar to this happens, and the story will forever on the brink of being horrendous. Darth Kobra.
Author's responseThanks for your review. A new chapter has been posted.
- OK my previous review should be completely disregarded because after rereading it, it made no real sense, and the only part I could actually understand, was that I recommended the same thing as Shadowdrake. By the sorry for stealing your thoughts Drake, it was entirely unintentional.