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• Give It Your Best Shot

  (#) mrpietan 2012-11-09

  Alright...another update :) A very interesting chapter and I look forward to the next installment ... :)

  Author's response

  Thank you!

• Give It Your Best Shot

  (#) Shadowdrake 2012-11-10

  The story is really becoming quite interesting and innovative. Well done.
  
  The one thing that automatically came to my mind during the discussion are Horcrux. A horcrux is a part of a soul; so would it be possible to create a rift between the two Harry's and move one into a horcrux - and then put that part into an animated body?

  Author's response

  Thanks, I'm glad that you think so.
  
  As for you question...well, you'll have to continue reading. :)

• Give It Your Best Shot

  (#) ibskib 2012-11-10

  Nice to see such quick updates.
  One correction
  feet - feat (three instances)

  Author's response

  Thank you, I've fixed it.

• Give It Your Best Shot

  (#) Insan3 2012-11-11

  OK. This is a great story, however I feel that these next few chapters are going to be make it or break it for this story. In my not experienced authors mind I feel that a good direction to go would be a magically constructed body for Peurter to inhabit, utilizing some form of anchor to keep the construct stable. Like a ring, pendent, or even a gem embedded in his chest, like a heart. Like I said I'm not an experienced author, but I have seen a few stories were something similar to this happens, and the story will forever on the brink of being horrendous. Darth Kobra.

  Author's response

  Thanks for your review. A new chapter has been posted.

• Give It Your Best Shot

  (#) Insan3 2012-11-11

  OK my previous review should be completely disregarded because after rereading it, it made no real sense, and the only part I could actually understand, was that I recommended the same thing as Shadowdrake. By the sorry for stealing your thoughts Drake, it was entirely unintentional.

• Give It Your Best Shot

  (#) lleon 2013-08-06

  OK, this was entirely unexpected on my part. Initially it seemed a info-dump but Porteur dying in his world really sent me for a loop.
  So does Porteur create a new body for himself, create one for teen-Harry, or just share between the two of them.
  Hope it wont be like Quirrel though, now would be weird.
  Teen-Harry may be scared but he does have courage the way he mouths off to Porteur was really cute.

• Give It Your Best Shot

  (#) TxA_GunFighter 2014-05-10

  Good chapter and story.
  
  gunny

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