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Chapter 2

"Get out. No one likes you."

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: PG-13 - Genres:  - Characters: Bob Bryar,Frank Iero,Gerard Way,Mikey Way,Ray Toro - Published: 2012/11/11 - Updated: 2012/11/11 - 1162 words

Reviews

• Heaven Help Us

  (#) xxMikeyxx 2012-11-11 02:33:43 PM

  Oh my god!!!! His vocal chords got cut out!! Can't wait for more =D

  Author's response

  Thanks so much! :D

• Heaven Help Us

  (#) Cookie_monster 2012-11-11 02:36:02 PM

  :O This is scary but really good :D I feel kinda sorry for Bob :L
  
  Update soon please :D
  
  Love Hozzie
  Xoxo

  Author's response

  Haha thanks! :D
  Me too. D:
  
  I'll try to!

• Heaven Help Us

  (#) Sam41 2012-11-11 03:12:45 PM

  >8| oh-kay...no need to chop out vocal chords people, let's keep it classy. HAH FUCK THAT, rip em out and shred em into spahgetti,
  Wow I'm demented 0'o

  Author's response

  Haha that's beautiful :')

• Heaven Help Us

  (#) Obsessive-Fangirl 2012-11-11 03:19:16 PM

  This is really good! Now, because I feel like it, Imma audition for a victim!
  
  Name: Elizabeth "Liz" Grace Diamond
  Age: 16 (can be changed)
  Looks:
  Hair-Black with bright white streaks. Straight as a pin and extremely long, goes down to waist. Normally wears it in a low ponytail.
  Eyes-Bright hazel.
  Skin-Light natural tan.
  How you got kidnapped: I was walking home from a friend's house by myself in the dark. I think you can figure it out from there ;)
  Any family members(do they care about you?): Mother Maria, and two younger sisters, Rebecca and Katherine. They all freak out over my disappearance.
  Anything else?: Don't think so.
  
  Hope you like :)

  Author's response

  Wow! Thank so much for reading and auditioning! :D

• Heaven Help Us

  (#) gerardsvictim22 2012-11-11 04:12:11 PM

  Name:Emily Harris
  Age: 14
  Looks:
  Hair-Long black with bright red and blue streaks.
  Eyes- 1 blue and 1 brown.
  Skin-White.
  How you got kidnapped: Was walking home from work, and maybe saw something I should't have seen.
  Any family members(do they care about you?): I live by myself, but when my younger brother Spencer comes by to see that I'm not home. He gets a feeling something's wrong.
  Anything else?: Maybe they drug me from trying to escape a few times.
  
  I'm a little nervous, because this is the only second time i've ever auditioned for any story. So hope it;s ok.

  Author's response

  It's fine :)

• Heaven Help Us

  (#) Mirazal 2012-11-11 06:11:29 PM

  THIS WAS NOT A BAD CHAPTER
  WHAT ARE YOU EVEN SAYING
  
  Eh, I'll give you a victim.
  
  Name: Joshua Hardin
  Age: 22
  Looks:
  Hair- light brown, cut right past the ears, fluffy dude bangs
  Eyes: dark green
  Skin: 'ayyy WHITE BOY
  How you got kidnapped: went outside at night to investigate a suspicious noise
  Any family members?: parents disowned him and his younger brother (Hunter, 18) and they live with their best friend and best friend's cousin; I guess, if he died, the parents would be concerned somewhat
  Anything else: hmm. Maybe give him a girlfriend. Katelynne, 21? Idk, just thought if Joshy boy is gonna die he might as well have some love first

  Author's response

  Ok :D

• Heaven Help Us

  (#) ColorfulShadow 2012-11-11 06:47:26 PM

  I'll give you TWO victims
  
  Name: Kyle Derle
  Age: 23
  Looks:
  Hair- electric blue hair that is "emo" like. It's fluffy wuffy too. And bits of his hair sticks up at the top.
  Eyes- turquoise
  Skin- PALE
  How you got kidnapped: he was camping with his brother Derek in the woods and then BA BAM!
  Any family members: his brother Derek. His mom. They both care about him. His dad could care less.
  Anything else: he likes any shade of blue.
  
  Name: Derek Derle
  Age: 23
  Looks:
  Hair- he has awesome hair. It's sort of like Dahvie Vanity's but better. It's layered and poofed. It's rainbow colored too
  Eyes: green
  Skin- PALE AS FUCK
  How you got kidnapped: He was out looking for Kyle.
  Any family members: Same as Kyle's. Mom who cares. Kyle who did care. And dad who didn't give a fuck.
  Anything else: he likes rainbows.
  
  There you go!

  Author's response

  Thanks :D

• Heaven Help Us

  (#) Ravan-VanSlaughter 2012-11-12 01:47:28 AM

  This is getting so exciting now, I can't wait for more and here's another victim for you =)
  
  Name: Susie Hill
  Age: 6
  Looks: Small and very fragile looking
  Hair- Short curly blond
  Eyes- baby blue
  Skin- slightly tanned
  How you got kidnapped: She was playing with her puppy outside the front garden but a noise coming from the woods made her curious so she went to investigate but was caught by the killer
  Any family members(do they care about you?): Her parents loved her very much and were very protective of her, they never let her out of the house on her own

  Author's response

  Thanks so much :D

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