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Remember, most things can easily be lost.
(#) aweirdtree 2012-11-18 02:01:59 PMi really like the rhythm in this one, for some reason. it makes me feel sort of serene or something like that. thank you for this one, again :3 it's very beautiful even though it makes me think about sad things and some things maybe not so very beautiful... if you get me.
Author's responseThank you :)
(#) AdnarimSmada 2012-11-18 04:33:24 PMI like.
I get sort of a religious attitude out of this one.
"It's not real until you see it"
I don't know, it just gives me the feeling that there isn't really an acceptance that the universe came from nothing, you know?
I personally don't think it did. Maybe that's why I see that in this poem.
Well, it's good to see more work from you.
P.S: I really think this would be another good one for Poetry to Stories if you'd allow it a second time.
Author's responseI never really thought of it that way, since I'm not religious, but it's nice to see there are more sides to it than the one I see :)
So, thank you, and yes, feel free to feature it if you'd like to :)