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Little Smirk

For Heartbreak_Beauty's Challenge; Based off of Little Smirk by Theory of a Deadman

Category: Humor - Rating: PG-13 - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2012/11/17 - Updated: 2012/11/18 - 1120 words

Reviews

• Little Smirk

  (#) atomickilljoy 2012-11-17 09:11:39 PM

  See? This is fucking incredible!

  Author's response

  -Looks- mmm mm, no.. Look at yours, and Ash's I DON'T STAND A CHANCE

• Little Smirk

  (#) AshIsNotOnFire 2012-11-17 09:17:46 PM

  ZACK AS IN MERRICK, OR.

  Author's response

  YES ZACK MERRICK
  She thought it felt empty without a ATL refrence

• Little Smirk

  (#) Mirazal 2012-11-17 11:07:06 PM

  -makes weird sheep noises-
  Holy fucking shit, Sam.
  
  ... wow, do you hate Kassper a lot?
  :D I'm just messin' wit ya.
  (?)
  Anyway this was AHHH IT WAS AMAZING

  Author's response

  Yeah I think this was a ploy to get back at me for repedatly calling her a dumbass

• Little Smirk

  (#) Heartbreak_Beauty 2012-11-18 08:48:46 AM

  Grammar: 4
  Plot: 2 points. I really didn’t feel connected with the plot in this one. It feels as if you just threw the ending together.
  Characters: 4 points
  Content Knowledge: 4 points
  
  14/16

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