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Don't Stop Me Now-Queen

There it is and there they are. A lot of learning done, both professional and personal.

Category: Panic! At The Disco - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama - Characters:  - Published: 2012/11/18 - Updated: 2012/11/18 - 8162 words

Reviews

• Every Little Thing

  (#) ReddyDevil 2012-11-22 02:15:10 PM

  This chapter was good, like all the rest, and it did show how they were all changing slightly due to their new fame and success, but, I don't know. To me it just felt disjointed, like there were too many time jumps. And sometimes it was confusing because I thought that it was happening a day after or something, but it turned out to be a couple of weeks, or even a whole month. So yeah, great chapter, but the disjointedness made me not like it as much as previous chapters. :)

  Author's response

  Yes, not my favorite chapter either. My frame of mind at the time that I was writing this and where I intended to post it were completely different. I tried to fix a lot of it, but it was hard. There aren't any other chapters like this one, so they'll hopefully be less confusing. Thank you for reading and reviewing, though.

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