“I just don’t want to hurt you.” Duff’s hot breath blew against Izzy’s cheek in a soft whisper. “You can’t hurt me, Duff. You never have.”
(#) The1000500100900 2012-11-26 09:22:07 PMMy soul've been hurting while reading because I'm still in Nikki's team. But that doesn't change that the chapter is well written, sweet, loving and so on. Also there's this twist with Slash which I love about this part of story, it remembers me some old James Bond films (no idea why).
Yeah, well done! ^^
Author's responseIt makes my soul so happy to know that you enjoyed my writing, even though I know you're pulling for Nikki ;)
Funny enough I've never seen a James Bond movie, but the comparison still made me smile!
Thanks for your review!
(#) axlroseiscool 2012-11-26 11:34:42 PMOh snap Slash! Ohhh how awkward for Duff & Izzy! XD But awww this chapter was really sweet and moving (and of course, well written!). I loveeed it!I Can't wait to see what happens next!!! :D
Author's responseAwww, Thank you so much! It makes me so happy you like my writing ^^
- Okay. You were absolutely right. I loved this. xD
I like how they didn't hesitate with ''real'' sex. this was more sweet and careful... awh..
Can't wait to read more, nice twist, Good work!
Author's responseThank you so much! Glad you enjoyed it. I'm glad you liked the twist. There will be more of those to come.