- hmm, only a small nit... the merge, I would have liked to "see" a bit more, but over all, chuckle, keeping it like it is adds a bit of mystery to it. Although, I think you might want to have Harry (when he has time) go through his memories and getting them sorted out.... he might want to throw out the "unusable" stuff....
I look forward to reading the next chapter.
Author's responseThanks for the review. New chapter up.