A surprise visit, a fight, and Jon Walker being Jon Walker - really, who doesn't love that? XD
(#) atomickilljoy 2012-12-05 04:22:28 PMI don't know. It really depends on how you end this one. I love this story! I love it so much! :D
Author's responseWell, I wasn't going to, but then I orchestrated the fight between her and Chris, and the plot says that that would be resolved in the sequel, when he tells her what he knows. Now, if I DO do the sequel, I can follow that and it'd be fine, but if I don't, I'm gonna have to think up a way to solve it. :P
And thank you so much; your love for this is most welcome! :3
- I would definitely enjoy a sequel. I really like this story and the way you write characters, and Lou; so more of all of this (and perhaps follow her relationship with Spencer, because Loucer) would be accepted with open and loving arms. :3
About this chapter...
Brendon, omg, chin up baby! Don't get upset! No! Head high, honey!
I just like Brendon. He's super nice.
Jon, my man, you go bro. -nods- You go. -high fives Jon-
The plot developments were really interesting. I'd like to hear the aftermath of Brendon's parents' visit! And the secret that Chris won't tell, I MUST HAVE IT! (In a sequel, eh how bout dat -nudges you-)
Lolz, please update again soon! Wow, finished with school? LUCKY. :)
Author's responseHaha, you guys have convinced me; I'll make the announcement next Wednesday. :3
Don't worry about Brendon; he'll be fine. You'll see in the next chapter - as well as finding out the aftermath of the 'discussion' between him and his parents.
Yes, high-fives all 'round for Jon! XD
Thanks; I try and keep it interesting. :P Haha, Chris' secret? Yes, that will be revealed in the sequel. And speaking of plot developments, it will be something REALLY BIG (just to make you even more curious now! XD)
Yes, I am! Whoooo! XD Update will be next week Wednesday; that soon enough for ya? :D
(#) Nicoleisnotunder 2012-12-07 05:22:48 PMSEQUEL YES
Thats all i have to say
This chapter was great!!
Author's responseHaha, yet another new reviewer, I see! :) Thank you for doing so, anyway.
Yeah, go Jon. XD And I shall take into account what you said about a sequel. :3
(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2012-12-09 09:08:34 AMPlease, please please do a sequel. PLEASE!
Jon Walker... ah, so sexy and perfect. I loved the cat thing, and the birthing kittens comment later. Jon + cats= fucking adorable.
Brendon fighting with his parents? Sad. Blind comment= lame. Stupid lady/mother.
I was waiting for her to talk about being scared with where she would end up. Awww. I love Jon to pieces but she's Spencers!
WHAT DOES CHRIS KNOW? I NEED TO KNOW! I was like on edge waiting. What is it?!?
Author's responseHaha, okay, okay, you've convinced me. :D There'll be a sequel. sighs I just can't seem to give this up! XD
Yeah, Jon's wicked. Wow, I totally didn't notice that he had a cat-theme going on there for that chapter. 0.0 Ha, whoops. XD
Yes, there seems to be a lot of parent-fighting going on in this fic. Brendon's argument and the aftermath will be made clear next chapter, though.
Hehe, totally agree with you there. Loucer all the way! XD
You won't find out Chris' secret until the sequel. It's pretty big, pretty intense. I forecast that it will bring some major drama. grins evilly
Great review! :3