"I broke up with you partly because I found out Duff loved you, like real fucking love. The, I’ll lasso the moon, reach for the stars, climb a fucking mountain love.”
(#) The1000500100900 2012-12-09 02:45:51 PMI'm just going to share with you my point of view in the first part of review ;) So here we go:
1) I hate Slash right now! How can anyone be so rude to Izzy? Sweet, cute, nice Izzy? It's impossible! I just... No. Izzy doesnt deserve that!
2) I think that Izzy doesn't feel right with Duff, I mean like he don't really feel that feeling is because of how close Duff is with Slash. Maybe Duff reminds him of Slash in some way? That would even match to the situation I guess...
3) Just because of 2 Nikki is the best choice! (Yeah, I know, I'm still talking about the same thing but... What can I do?) Not even because Duff isn't good or not loving enough, but I think that Izzy needs something new... Like Nikki he needs a chalange! :D And, yeah.
So that's what I came up with while reading, not trying to change your idea of the story, just you know trying to show what I feel about. Maybe you'll get some inspiration by that? Who knows?
Really good job, nice chapter. Like always, you made a little twist, and... Yeah, well done!
And the last thing is I really, really, really hope you're going to update faster this time 'cause personally I felt like dying from curious :P Also sorry that this turned out to be sooooo long and for that half of it doesn't make sense!
Author's responseAre you kidding? I love reviews like this!!! I love to hear what people think and feel about the characters.
It helps me to figure out ideas and inspires even more twists :) As long as people are mad at the character's actions and not me these are the reviews that inspire me to write more and faster!
So thank you a thousand times for your review! I'll post the next chapter soon and I really hope you'll give me one of your well thought out reviews again :D
- I didn't except that confession! Yeah! but great tension as always, and I like the ending... damn, can't wait to read more..
You know I like this xD I'm under the spell...!
And I like hos Duff could show some rage (even if he regreted it. Nice idea.)
Author's responseThank you, Thank you! I wasn't sure how enraged Duff was going to go over, but it just felt right you know? Thanks for letting me know it was good :)
I'm really curious what kind of a confession did you expect??
(#) axlroseiscool 2012-12-09 04:00:56 PMOh my goodness. Slash. What. Oh I love Slash but HOW COULD HE DO THAT TO POOR IZZY?! And Duff, he must be so heartbroken that Slash did that omg. It was another great chapter, I love how descriptively you write and put such emotion into the story. :D
Author's responseSlash is very jealous individual, as we will see later ;)
And thank you so much for the compliments on my writing! It warms my heart.
- I love this story! I'm loving your Slash and Axl, will they stay together? I hope they do, i love them. I love Duff and Izzy but i also like Izzy and Nikki, they are hot together. Your characters seem real and it's like i'm watching it play out.
When will you next update because i can't wait anymore! :D
Author's responseThank you so much for this awesome review!! I'm so happy you're enjoying it and it warms my heart to know my characters are so life like :)
I can't say if anyone will definitely stay together but I can say I'll update sometime this week, promise :) Thanks for reading and reviewing!