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Secrets Revealed.

Lindsey finds out something she had never known about Gerard.

Category: My Chemical Romance - Rating: G - Genres: Angst,Drama - Characters: Mikey Way - Warnings: [?] - Published: 2012/12/09 - Updated: 2012/12/10 - 2445 words - Complete

Reviews

• Homeless

  (#) Mirazal 2012-12-09 06:32:07 PM

  The lovey-dovey stuff was adorable. Just, aww.
  I cannot help but love Lindsey here. Like, definition of strong female lead. -nods-
  This should be a movie. Seriously. Published as a novel or a movie.
  
  I notice that the way you wrote this seemed kind of different... maybe it's just me. It was mostly storytelling and informative, but I really enjoyed it.
  Please update again soon!

  Author's response

  I actually noticed that myself! I started writing a new fic (ill publish it after I finish this one) and I tried writing a little more descriptively with a little less dialogue. I find that dialogue can be a little awkward at times and its just easier to explain what happened as the narrator, rather than putting it simply as a characters voice. It's much more complex and enjoyable that way, or as it seems to me.

• Homeless

  (#) davidthesquirrel 2012-12-10 05:42:07 AM

  Oh, and thank you! self-esteem one up!
  
  

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