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I Miss You

by drfeelgood 3 Reviews

Kind of going through the relationship my brother and I had with my father from start to finish. Just what I wish I could say to him.

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst,Drama - Characters:  - Published: 2012/12/11 - Updated: 2012/12/12 - 252 words

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  • I Miss You

    (#) GotSparkle 2012-12-11 08:04:07 PM

    Always here if you need me. It's good. I like this. Not the ending and end parts, obviously.... But its well written.

    Author's response

    Thanks love :)
  • I Miss You

    (#) Mirazal 2012-12-11 08:06:43 PM

    -gives you hug-
    This is really sad, but writing with emotion is a very good thing. It's good to let it out and stuff.
    I think you're an excellent writer. You've also apparently been through shit, bur you're here today and I admire you for that.
    -gives another hug-

    Author's response

    Thank you darling! I actually haven't been through nearly as much shit as my brother, but he handles it better. I actually almost WASN'T here.
  • I Miss You

    (#) AshIsNotOnFire 2012-12-11 08:08:11 PM

    Oh god, Leslie.. That honestly made me want to cry, that's amazing. I'm so sorry, I hate to know what you've been through, just know that I'll always be here for you.

    Author's response

    Awww I didn't want to make you cry! I just needed to let some stuff out. thank you though sweetie.

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