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The Breakdown of California's Sunken Children

Distorted, heartbreaking beats...heartbreaking hearts. Beating hearts demolished...shot dead. BOOM. Life.

Category: Poetry - Rating: G - Genres: Angst - Characters:  - Published: 2012/12/17 - Updated: 2012/12/18 - 267 words

Reviews

• The Breakdown of California's Sunken Children

  (#) KelseyChem 2012-12-18 08:59:44 PM

  That was wonderful, I love your writings o-o

  Author's response

  Thank you! O-O to you too. :D

• The Breakdown of California's Sunken Children

  (#) upinflames 2012-12-18 11:23:43 PM

  you're really awesome. js.
  
  -az

  Author's response

  You're really awesome. :P
  
  that was a terrible comeback.

• The Breakdown of California's Sunken Children

  (#) Mirazal 2012-12-22 11:28:45 PM

  Oh my gosh. Whoa.
  It's hard to find a really intense emotional killjoy oneshot. There's Black Parade, and AUs, but usually killjoy things are happy.
  I don't really know what I'm saying. Um. I really loved this. I love basically everything you write.
  Uh. I love you.
  Yup. Sorry this was late. :/

  Author's response

  Hahah, thank you! I love ya too, dude!
  
  Late? Pft! You don't even have to read any of my stuff. But I like it when you do. :D

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