The arrival scene at the Smith's unfolds and sets the mood for the tour-of-Vegas-that-is-so-obviously-a-date.
- I SQUEALED
I'M STILL SQUEALING
OMG I LOVE THIS
Those twins are literally me. They appear to be the biggest Loucer shippers ever, so. They are me.
I really like them, though. Oh my god, I was laughing so hard. I love them. They're adorable.
THE LOUCER MOMENTS THOUGH
I LOOKED LIKE :D THE ENTIRE TIME
They were really sweet.
The snide voice. Pahaha. Lol. Rofl. Lmao.
EVERY SINGLE COMMENT ABOUT RYAN ROSS WAS PERFECT
He is perfect
THE GAY SWIRLS THING IS ACCURATE
ACCURACY BEYOND ACCURACY
Dammit, Mezza. You're giving me feelings.
HAVE FUN IN ADELAIDE
UPDATE ASAP WHEN YOU GET BACK! :D
Author's responseHahah, I squealed when I was reading this! And I'm not a sqeauler at all.... It's a good thing no one was home to watch me jump up and down while grinning like a mad woman. XD
My beta thought that the twins would be well recieved, hahahahah. I'm glad you like them; I have so much fun writing their characters. They allow me to slip in a little bit of my personality and provide some comic relief in the form of humour very similar to mine. ;P
I did promise someone that the Loucer would be there!!!! I PROMISED, AND I DELIVERED! XD
DUDE, I TOTALLY KNOW, RIGHT?!?!?! Although writing that part has now made me severely question his sexuality during that period of his life, hahahaha. ;D
Aw, I hope they're good feelings?
Well, I'm back - I survived my three very energetic and sporty male cousins (they sort of left me alone once I got rough with one of them, hooking his leg from underneath him and dropping him onto his back on the ground after holding him in a headlock and nearly kicking him in the balls) - but the chapter's still not written, and I don't know when I'll get a chance to start. My dad broke his ankle nearly a week ago, and it's fallen to my mum and I to do most of the work on the block/farm I live on because he can't. We'll see. There's always midnight writing sessions! XD
(#) atomickilljoy 2012-12-22 03:15:05 AMDUDE
THE RYAN ROSS COMMENT HAD ME DYING
"an explosion of gayness and swirls"
Author's responseHahaha, yes. Oh yes. I will admit that I smirked and giggled a bit while writing it. XD And it's totally true, btw. ;)
(#) XxPerfectTomorrowxX 2013-01-06 08:44:17 PMSmell associated with automatic safety? Total aw moment.
RYAN, DO NOT STEP ON YANKEE'S TAIL! That's hilarious though, haha. And I kind of hoped against hope for a 'yeah, she's my girlfriend' out of the freakin' blue/makes no sense kind of comment.
I just take her to do a total double take, and then kiss him, you know... kissing is good.
Aww Ryan/Spencer brotherhood. What boy in this band doesn't make me melt? That is a question I can't answer.
That was the sexiest trip I have ever read. Ever.
One big explosion of gayness and swirls... EPIC line.
O.o hit man to take him out, haha. I love his sister. Totally love them.
And sorry for the long ridiculous review. I reviewed as I was reading... and I loved it, as usual. And more?!? I waited sooo long. More must be on the way. and I see you have a new story, which I must check out asap, and I need to see if I'm behind on Phantoms. Oh my. Where have I been?
Author's responseHahah, I thought I better throw something romantic in there.
Ryan's kind of a fail like that in this fic, in the way that he keeps accindentally doing that. XD Ah, well. Next time, huh? Haha, yeah, just a spot of random, spontaneous making out the first time she meets the family.
ALL OF THEM!!!!
Fistpumps Yessss! Glad I hold that title. Maybe I should include more... scratches non-existant beard thoughtfully
I KNOW BUT ITS TOTALLY TRUE, RIGHT? I am just simply stating a fact. ;)
I had fun writing them.
Dude, long review? Have you read mine? I kinda tend to get carried away like that. Yes, yes I do! Yes, yes you must! I quite like it. I'm very proud of my writing in that. No, you're not behind on Phantoms. But I am. hides
(#) MrsWayBeckett 2013-02-04 06:12:26 PMAn explotion of gayness and swirls xD
Update soon please!
Can't wait for their date :D
Author's responseIndeed it seems. XD
I'm trying, I swear, but I've started school again and hit a rut with the first part of the date... I know what happens later in the day, I just have to write something that will get me there. :/