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My questions, in the form of a poem.
(#) Obsessive-Fangirl 2012-12-21 11:36:44 PMI would review, but there's a few things stopping me:
1. I've had a pretty rough life for a 14-year-old, and some of your fics/lyrics/etc. remind me of that time, and I have to sleep off the sadness straight away or I'll do something drastic, and then when I wake up I'll totally forget about it.
2. THIS IS THE MAIN ISSUE-I have a problem where my heart beats faster than it should, and anything horror/gore/violence makes me jump ten feet in the air. When a lot of people get scared, their heart starts beating faster, and if mine starts beating faster, I may die. Not only does this mean I can't do PE (gym) most of the time at school, but I can't watch horror movies or watch gore or anything like that, even reading it makes me jump (I'm a scaredy-cat). Therefore, I can't read your gory/horror stories.
3. I'm at school a lot of the time I'm on Ficwad, and I have to be subtle about it so I don't get caught.
Now that you're leaving, I feel guilty, almost like it's my fault. :(
Author's responseBabe, don't you ever feel guilt for my decisions. I'm just being a whiny bitch, as usual. I'll see if I can write something less scary for you, just because I'm nice (HAH!) like that. (Ignore me while I laugh because I said I'm nice.)
(#) RyanCyanideKiller 2012-12-21 11:42:00 PMJust before I start, I've read everything you've put up, but I never reviewed and I don't have a valid excuse for that... Sorry hon!
Anyways, I feel like part of it is a personality thing. You've said some things that I know people on here don't agree with, so that could be part of it. I know that there's a few authors that I ignore simply because I don't like their personality (thats probably a really shallow and unfair thing to do, but I know I'd personally rather not support someone I have an issue with). It could be that.
Or, like me and my brother, you have people who are invisible or silent readers. I know I don't like giving feedback on things because it feels so... Awkward, and sometimes I feel like I'm being fake when I give feedback on things like writing, because I seem way too happy and sometimes I make it sound like its the beat thing I've ever read even if I think its just something decent.
If you want me to actually leave feedback on your stuff, I can.
Also, this is probably the longest review I've ever written.
(#) Mcrroxursox45 2012-12-22 12:05:16 AMFor me, it's the whole BVB thing, I'll be honest.
I don't like them, and when you include it in the description, I automatically say 'NOPE!".
I know there's no section for them, but that doesn't mean post it on MCR's section. It's like when BOTDF fans post on here.
I'm sorry if this sounds rude, but post the BVB somewhere else. If it's a crossover between both bands, and MCR is actually in a good amount in it, then hell, post it.
You wanted to know, so I told you.
BUUUUUT, since your leaving it doesn't matter anyway ;)
(#) Mcrroxursox45 2012-12-22 12:13:34 AMOh, nevermind.
I looked through your stuff, and it doesn't look like thats you who I was talking about.
Yeah, my reason is because a lot of them are songs. I don't enjoy lyrics if I can't hear the music to go with it. Simple as that. For your written story work? The summery doesn't grab my attention.
Author's responseYou could at least try. Give them a quick read, see if you like them. Simple as that. And as for the lyrics? Once again, just read over them. Imagine the music in your head.
(#) Mcrroxursox45 2012-12-22 07:22:01 AMI'm sorry, but I can't read something that doesn't grab my attention failrly soon... I just can't.
And I've tried doing that with AJ, and once again, I can't. I don't read her stuff either.
Sorry to see you go (Kinda), Butter Ball.
Author's responseYou don't call a person that's struggled with bulimia "Butter Ball". That's just fucking offending. Do you know just how much I've fucking struggled with my fucking body issues? I've had shitloads of issues with them.
Thanks for being a cunt.
(#) ValentineRevenge 2012-12-22 09:29:43 AMActually, I love your stuff. As dark and gory as it is, I love it because besides loving dark gory shit, msot times I can relate big time. ANd on the other side of it, there needs to be more authors who don't include themselves/other people LITERALLY as a major character in the story line, and doesn't write some happy perky highschool fic with all those pairings. Like no lie, the minute I see 'highschool' in the description, I usually turn away unless its like yanno, highschool with situations like drug use eating disorders, self harm... Something thats somewhat relatable...