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• The Lemon Games

  (#) ReapPheonix 2012-12-26

  I've never seen a story quite like this one, a stroke of pure genius I asure you. l'm stunned by how much you got done in so little time. I have high expectations of you don't let me down. I'm sure you won't.

• The Lemon Games

  (#) ReapPheonix 2012-12-26

  I've never seen a story quite like this one, a stroke of pure genius I asure you. l'm stunned by how much you got done in so little time. I have high expectations of you don't let me down. I'm sure you won't.

  Author's response

  To be fair, I didn't really do this in a short time. I've had this story going on for sometime and it was originally on Fanficton, but with the crack down in June, I had to move it over to YourFanfiction, and they eventually went down as well. I was told by someone who didn't like Adultfanfiction's interface about this site, so here I am

• The Lemon Games

  (#) Godlywind475 2012-12-29

  I just want to say that this story is just to verify that you're a genius! I have never read a story like this and I must say I'm highly impressed. And I hope that you will continue with this astounding story.

  Author's response

  It may occassionally take some time for me to continue updating the story, but I assure you I'm not letting this one go

• The Lemon Games

  (#) TheMasterBraeden 2013-01-02

  So far so good. Though it feels like the story is flowing a bit fast. I mean I know the story is one that is essentially smut with a simple plot. But you almost never see or hear about Naruto training. And except for the invasion during the Chunnin Exams and the finals of the Chunnin Exam there never is any fight scenes. So that in my opinion would make the story better, I mean he has gained all of these abilities and you rarely see him using any of them.
  
  Though I do have a request and a question for the author. When you are increasing Naruto's skills and stats, would it be possible to show what he originally had and what it became? This way I do not have to switch back and forwards between chapters to figure out what he has. Now the question that I have for you is, you mentioned that certain characters would be brought back to life, would at some point we see either Kushina and, maybe, Mito Uzumaki?
  
  Again, good story, though whether you make the changes or not. I will still be reading your story as I enjoyed reading it.
  
  Master Braeden

• The Lemon Games

  (#) deathkin129 2013-01-20

  very good story and so on

• The Lemon Games

  (#) thiago_potter 2013-01-29

  This is realy good... Your history keeps getting better and better

• The Lemon Games

  (#) Tetsudai-kun 2013-01-30

  Just one thing, I think there was one medal you had a lower requirement for. The story itself is great and I love how you give everyone a sort of realistic personality (despite Naruto being able to bed anyone really), it really adds to the appeal. Good Job!

• The Lemon Games

  (#) Username159 2013-02-18

  While utilizing the overused 'trapped in a videogame' trope, HunterBerserkerWolf still keeps the story fresh and interesting. Part of the story's appeal is that it freely admits the rediculousness of the basic premise while not falling into the standard pitfalls of this trope (constant suicides to try again for example). The characters are realistic and canonical only deviating as a direct result of the plot. If you're looking for a smut fic with an entertaining storyline this is for you.

  Author's response

  Why thank you! i do try, and on some chapters this really shows. Others not so much.

• The Lemon Games

  (#) Hail_Archanfel 2013-03-01

  I agree with ReapPheonix. I've seen a few video game Naruto fics and yours is by far the best. I especially love the Klondike omake that you did.

• The Lemon Games

  (#) Hail_Archanfel 2013-03-17

  You've made yet another good chapter.

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