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The Lemon Games
(#) JonnyNapalm 2012-12-28
Fun variation on the 'Life in videogame' concept that's been popping up. The interaction system through the book is intriguing as is the idea that you've slightly altered the 'traditional' storyline to integrate some new characters. Thrilled to see this up in a new location now that YourFanFiction imploded. Looking forward to reading and reviewing future chapters.The Lemon Games
(#) The_Quest_One 2013-07-04
Serously... What the fuck is up with all the hate for Sakura and why are all you fucks the only ones writing stories now. I'm so sick of this shit. If you're going to include bashing then refrain from even writing a story or just leave that character out completly. Is it that fucking hard to write a decent story at the expense of the canon heroine nontheless? And seriously, the only thing you fuckers focus on with Sakura is that beginning stage in Part 1. Fuck character development I guess because once a "howler monkey" or what the fuck ever, always a howler monkey. That's some fucked up logic, and using that for ANY and ALL chacters makes this and others like it a bad story. I'll say it again. If you can't write a decent story at the expense of other characters, DON'T FUCKING INCLUDE THEM OR SPREAD YOUR STUPIDITY AND HATE AROUND!Author's response
Hmm, I guess I deserve this review a bit, though I sense a little too much animosity held at me for this. It was literally a one-time comment from back when I was in a bit of a angst mood for certain characters. As for spreading my stupidity, I would like to point out that what I wrote in this story isn't the worst out there. Will I include Sakura later on in the story? Perhaps, perhaps not. I'm still focused on Part 1. Thank you for your review anyways.The Lemon Games
(#) Crofty 2013-07-15
Not much to complain about but you did the math wrong in this one Naruto's Sexual Aura should be 53 because 15+18=33 and then you had him add 20 making it 53.Author's response
You're most likely correct on this, but there is a surprising amount of math that goes into this and a good deal of it gets lost sometimes and so I have to completely re-do it.The Lemon Games
(#) Crofty 2013-07-20
True, there were only small mistakes I think overall Naruto actually only has 7 skill points left over after doing all the math for it so you weren't that far off with them.The Lemon Games
(#) Bowser1313 2013-09-08
Question you mentioned Naruto's sexy form but have yet to put it in or even group sex, can we expect this our am I just now reminding you about it?The Lemon Games
(#) Akuma-Heika 2014-01-12
Surprised his stat increase in intelligence increased his current increase in skill points.
Surprised that when Naruto gets to Konoha he didn't prostitute himself over the missions board. That way he can have sex and make money.
Will he screw other civilian woman? (Read the Eroninja if you want to know of a list). DO the daimyo's count as civilians?
Do they even have Computers he can hack? More specifically are there PCs and an internet in their world?The Lemon Games
(#) KirigakurenoKijin 2014-03-17
hey love your story and recently joined the site but accidently rated your story badly sorry
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