Tristan is alone in this world or at least she thinks she is but something unexpected happens when her life is threatened. She is staring down a loaded gun with gerard flashing before her eyes and ...
(#) jack-the-ripper 2012-12-28 02:10:36 AMOh my, that's was intense!!
I love the way you always take your time to paint a clear picture of the events, explain what happens in detail and order and don't rush things. in many stories the moment some real action comes in, it kind of ruins the whole thing because that sort of stuff is hard to write. I suck at the scenes in which there is a lot going on, everything is intense and fast and emotional.. I can get stuck thinking over a single fucking paragraph for a week XD
You're so good, it's hardly fair haha
I'll be waiting for the next chapter, though I have feeling I'll be reading this one through a couple more times before I'm done having hysterics over it :)
Author's responseThis is the best review I have ever had. Thank you so so much for reading and reviewing. I am so honored to have a reader like you, hell I'm honored to have a reader who takes the time to write a review, especially one as good as yours. I think its important to express Tristan and Gerard's emotions since they are the main focus of this story. You have to see his their love unfolds and falls apart and comes together over the years with the band. I have so much in store for this story. I hope you stick with me on this journey.
(#) VenomShots 2012-12-28 01:27:35 PMOmg this chapter was totally ... WooW !
For a second I really belived that maybe T will suffer more then a `little` shot.
You know I usually hate to wait for new chapters but on your story (I still hate to wait) I`m pretty chill because I know that it`ll deserve and it`ll be a quality thing. So I already can`t wait ! :*
Author's responseThank you so much for being one of best readers ever. You guys are the reason I keep posting on this site. I love you for reading and reviewing. I really appreciate your lovely words and I will get right on writing the new chapter.
- You truly are the best writer ever!
the wait is agonizing but so worth it when it comes to the new chapter. I adore Tristan and Gerard's relationship, but I honestly don't think I can wait any longer for them to be together! You never cease to amaze me with this story and now I just- I NEED to see what happens next!
You better update like right now missy or I will hunt you down and tickle you util you do!
Author's responseOh gosh thank you. MAking me blush over here! I am working on the next chapter. I hope to have it up soon. I had this one up in a small window of time and I hope to do the same with the next chapter! Oh no don't tickle me, I'm super ticklish lol!