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Give It Your Best Shot
(#) ibskib 2012-12-29
corrections:
flood -flooded
sooth -soothed
happen - happened
notoriety - reputation
(notoriety is negative fame, so doesn't fit that well)
skill - skilledAuthor's response
Thank you for the corrections. It seems that no matter how many times I have the chapter read through small mistakes slip through. :)Give It Your Best Shot
(#) mrpietan 2012-12-29
Didn't see any nits; that being said, well done. A nice interlude. And I look forward to the next installment.Give It Your Best Shot
(#) lleon 2013-08-06
A bit of normality in all the madness. Hopefully soothes both Harry and James souls.
Loved Bethany, typical teenager.
Wonder why Harry is so against Remus though, did Porteus get betrayed in his timeline.
Lily seems overwhelmed by her child's return but with so many secrets I fear the rift between them will only grow.
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