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by Zenathea 2 Reviews

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Category: Harry Potter - Rating: R - Genres: Drama,Fantasy - Characters: Harry,James,Lily - Warnings: [!!!] [?] - Published: 2012/12/29 - Updated: 2012/12/29 - 5048 words

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  • Give It Your Best Shot

    (#) ibskib 2012-12-29 07:54:36 AM

    corrections:
    flood -flooded
    sooth -soothed
    happen - happened
    notoriety - reputation
    (notoriety is negative fame, so doesn't fit that well)
    skill - skilled

    Author's response

    Thank you for the corrections. It seems that no matter how many times I have the chapter read through small mistakes slip through. :)
  • Give It Your Best Shot

    (#) mrpietan 2012-12-29 11:27:02 AM

    Didn't see any nits; that being said, well done. A nice interlude. And I look forward to the next installment.

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