A one-shot drabble. It's a spoof, a parody of all those Severitus stories.
rotfl - I enjoy the occasional Severitus fic but they are frighteningly numerous. This is probably one of the best spoofs on the subject I've read - very well done!
Well done - I like the fact that there are two entirely different scenes where Snape and Harry discuss the possibility. And Snape's flippancy in the first scene is superb.
(#) Loise 2005-10-04
I love those dreams within a dream fics. They consistly scare the living lights out of the character, in this case Harry.
Holy crud this is funny. "Luke Skywalker was told dramatically while in the midst of a battle. What do I get? A smirk in the middle of detention." Hysterical.
(#) Rous 2006-05-11
Well, to begin with, I was turned off by the story because it was so OOC. However, discovering it was a dream set it in perspective. Then, the second dream sequence was priceless. You also tied it up very well. All-in-all, a well written story with a touch of humour.
Now my beef: a drabble, by definition is a short story of one hundred words. Yours exceeds thirteen hundred. So, in reality, it is a short story or a vignette. You can also have variations, such as drubbles, tribbles and quabbles, but the drabble itself should be the one hundred words. Just an FYI.
that was the funniest story since i read about Harry painting Fawkes pink.
thanks for writing
A pleasure to read. Thanks for writing.
(#) ilex 2006-12-07
That was really a clever double dream, and very funny, especially the last bit!
A great one-shot, that I will recommend to my friends.
(#) riko 2007-11-09
That was one of the best humour stories i've read! =)Very creative. Loved it!
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