Gerard and Donna talk. Tristan and her father talk. A new man walks into Tristan's life. PRIDE is born. Jealousy and issues come to light. What's next for Tristan and the band in the future? Jealou...
(#) jack-the-ripper 2013-01-04 02:57:01 AMsqueak
why is that I can never get enough of yhis story, the minute I finish reading the last word I start waiting for the next chapter?
I loved this, I loved how well you pictured what went on in the backround while Adam came to hit on tristan, I mean you could've left Gerard out of it and it would still have been a great scene but having Gerard sitting there, jealous as hell and claiming Tristan his in his mind.. that's exactly what I wanted to hear :)
Author's responseHah, have I told you how much I love you???!! I love hearing from you on every chapter. They never cease to make my night or day! I am now working on the next chapter....you will be surprised for what I have in store!!!
(#) kirziwirzi98 2013-01-04 06:09:08 PM:] I hate when I start reading a story and then finally catch up and have to wait for updates :] I don't mind though :] It kinda adds to the story I suppose :]
Loved this chapter :] Update soon :]
Author's responseThank you!!! I am writing the next chapter this week!