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Death Ain't A Disco

Sugar, you better run. . .

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG-13 - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2013/01/13 - Updated: 2013/01/14 - 313 words

Reviews

• Death Ain't A Disco

  (#) BipolarUnicorn 2013-01-13 06:54:26 PM

  This is really amazing, I really do like it. I like the name "Death Ain't A Disco" it's pretty unique and just generally a fan-fucking-tastic name.
  
  You did a great job on this. :3

  Author's response

  Thank you so much. c: I appreciate your comments because this is my first time writing poetry. :D My day is made now. :3

• Death Ain't A Disco

  (#) ColorfulShadow 2013-01-13 06:55:29 PM

  This seems like something Blood on the Dance Floor would sing (which is a good thing because I love them.)
  
  It's awesome Shayla!

• Death Ain't A Disco

  (#) nerds_assemble 2013-01-13 07:26:01 PM

  :O
  
  That was fucking terrifying!
  
  Really intense, man. It was creepy. I'm rating it up, though.
  
  Because it was really fantastic.
  
  AND EXTREMELY SCARY.
  
  Which is hard, 'cause I don't normally scare easily. I think. I don't really know...the only movie I consider scary is 'A Clockwork Orange'...maybe something else...
  
  BUT ANYHOW. My first poem sucked and somehow your first poem is sooooooo lalalala.
  
  Uhm, yeppers. I was just rambling cause you shook me up with that poem. Really fantastically creepy, man.
  
  KEEP WRITING MORE POEMS!!!

• Death Ain't A Disco

  (#) Mirazal 2013-01-13 07:36:35 PM

  Oh my god this is really good.
  I can see you did work hard on this. :)
  
  But man, the story it tells... Holy shit. That's cool.
  
  I liked this a lot! It's super great!

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