"A smile bigger than I had ever conjured up before was plastered on my face, and I had never felt so completely spontaneous."
(#) NotKissingYouGoodBye 2013-01-14 09:21:59 PMthis. was. beautiful. I Loved it. It was realistic and meaningful. I understood everything and I love how you actually researched your information. Really good job. this is one of my favorite stories. thank you for writing this.
Author's responseYayay!! :D I'm really particular about researching :P Thank you!!
(#) Vivalalife 2013-01-15 04:47:08 AMMy gid. I loved it. Normally I hate it when someone dies (big fan of sappy, happy endings) but this was just the perfect way to end it. It was realistic and sad, but sort of happy at the same time. Perfect.
I'd love to read an epilogue, I'm really excited to see what you're going to do with it.
Author's responseI'm so glad :D I thought people might be mad the way I ended it :P Thank you so much!!
(#) MidnightBlues 2013-01-15 08:44:41 AMWhat about the black parade or something?
Your writing style in this chapter and the one before reminds me of my friend, Chloe. She is really precise with how people die in her fanfics.
I thought Chloe had squished my heart with her fanfics, but this one... Lets just say that if you find my laughter and happiness, This story stole them.
Author's responseI'm sorry :P I'll return those as soon as I find them xD Thank you!
(#) kirziwirzi98 2013-01-16 02:49:00 PMI loved it. It was amazing :) it was really sweet what Gerard did :) and the Romeo and Juliet thing was a brilliant idea :) you still made me cry though :) I read a book about someone being sentenced to death before :/ this story was way better though :) can't wait to read more of your work!!
Author's responseHaha awww :D Thank you!!