Just a quick semi important question.
- Penina's probably gonna want more. XD
I don't have a problem with it. I usually just skim over those because its not quite my thing, but I have no problem with them. Feel free to do what you want, it's your story!
Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
- Umm... If my opinion in the matter counts, I feel like the sex scenes are good to be there, just because that's what their relationship is like, I think. It started out as mainly physical, the sex is a big part of it. Of course you don't have to write down every single time they have sex, so don't go pushing a scene into every single chapter :D In moderation, though, I think they're good. You write them well, I enjoy that. I think the pace you've now is okay. Yeah... That's what I think. If anyone cares...
But when it comes down to it, it's a matter of taste. It's your story, you say the last word.
(#) FrankIsMySexGod 2013-01-17 12:53:05 PMI'd love loads more of I were Brittany, but, seeing as I'm not, I agree 100% with Poppana. I'm incredibly in love with this story, so I'm not fussed either way. Whatever you choose, I'm sure will be written amazingly, so do whatever feels right in your opinion. :D xx