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Fevered Drones

They drain mothballs into your eyes and South Dakota flies into your head. Sincere, so dear to my dreary alibis. Such a shame we aren't all saying goodbye.

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst,Drama,Horror - Characters:  - Published: 2013/01/17 - Updated: 2013/01/18 - 269 words

Reviews

• Fevered Drones

  (#) BipolarUnicorn 2013-01-17 05:55:46 PM

  This. Is. Amazing. Its beautiful and a million fucking times better than anything I have ever written, i can't express my love for this right now.
  
  You are an amazing fantastic writer, don't ever ever stop.
  
  Abbie xx

  Author's response

  Ohmy...how can I...how do I...?
  
  Dude.
  
  I can't...that's such a big compliment, because you're like...like a god with your writing. I don't get how you can say it's better than anything you've written...you're like, so fawking fantabulous...how can you even say that?
  
  It's not true and you have to know that. You're the amazing writer here, not me. I just pass my time here, but you've got a knack for it...tell you what, if I never stop will you never stop?

• Fevered Drones

  (#) BipolarUnicorn 2013-01-17 06:08:40 PM

  It really means a lot telling me you like my writing, thank you.
  
  Like seriously thank you, it means a lot.
  
  We are going to (virtually) pinky promise that neither of us will never stop writing.
  
  But don't underestimate your writing, its amazing.
  
  GIVES THE BIGGGGGGGEST HUG TOO YOU EVER CAUSE YOUR AMAZING
  
  ^.^

  Author's response

  Awh, dude, you don't have to thank me. It's just true. :D
  
  Heheh, alright. Deal, I virtually pinky promise.
  
  Well, thank you, but writing is just a hobby for me. I like it, but I don't think it's the reason I'm here.
  
  I'M GIVING YOU MAJOR HUGGAGE RIGHT NOW CAUSE YOU'RE JUST TOO AWESOME

• Fevered Drones

  (#) BipolarUnicorn 2013-01-17 06:09:38 PM

  You made my day like a million times better by the way. c:

  Author's response

  :D :D :D :D :D
  
  Ohmygoshness, you do that for me too!!!

• Fevered Drones

  (#) Mirazal 2013-01-17 06:34:06 PM

  What... I...
  
  Sometimes I read your poetry, shut down the computer, and just wander around in a weird stupor questioning the meaning of life.
  
  Well maybe not completely, but your stuff seriously makes my brain work.
  
  And once my brain is tired I just sit back and kinda take in the beauty you create with words. Sometimes it doesn't make complete sense to me but it's just so strange and BEAUTIFUL that I just have to admire it a little. A lot.
  
  I love this so much.

  Author's response

  I...wha...just...
  
  :O
  
  That makes me sooooooooooo happy. As ti steal from Craig Tucker, but for cereal, dude.
  
  You make my heart burn, Mirazal....!
  
  ;)
  
  But, thank you soooooo much dude. You're too nice.

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