“You’re going to love this doll.” Izzy kissed Slash’s tummy before shoving him head first into the opposite wall by his jeans. Slash’s body pressed into the rickety wood as a hot body rub...
- oh I've been waiting! But take your time, no need to hurry. :)
Okay, so this was interesting to read! I like the way how slash got brushed aside by axl xD
Oh, you just go on (if you want), I will read it, enjoyable as always
Author's responseAw, thank you so much for your kind words and patience with me. I do promise to continue this story.
And very happy you enjoyed the Axl/Slash part c:
(#) shadowvt125 2013-02-14 09:18:28 AMHot and heart wrenching in one (lost) breath!
Have I told you how much I love your Izzy (might have done it at some point… once or twice…). Seriously: He’s sensitive (yeah, most write him that way, but there is no farther dimension to it… like said: plain), sensual, endearing yet damaged, strong willed if not stubborn, with a certain wild streak to him. Sigh…
May I quote my favorite line to this chapter (I’ll do it anyway)? ….vanished into the dark cerulean gloom of a heartless L.A. night.
Oh, and the conversation Axl and Izzy are having at the beginning of this chapter: love it!
Author's responseYou can tell me how much you love Izzy as much as you want! I will grin really big every time XD I agree he gets shuffled to the background so much I wanted to make him more dynamic and fun.
I hope you stay with this story as I'm not sure just how long it's gonna be. And feel free to comment about anything you'd like. I love reading your thoughts. Do you have a guy you're hoping Izzy ends up with? Just curious :) Thank you so much again!
(#) shadowvt125 2013-02-18 10:22:27 AMYou know, curiosity killed the cat!* So, you asked for it!
Kind of tricky question, ‘cause it is very, very hard to decide – so much beguiling options!
I’m a habitual shipper of Izzy/Axl – but I don’t think it would work out in this place: your dysfunctional/functional Slash/Axl is way to thrilling and even though your Axl cares for Izzy somehow, he is to mesmerized with his current lover and love experience (not yet -maybe in the far distant future, 25 (light) years from here…) to give his old pal this special kind of second thought.
As for Izzy/Slash: it would be fascinating for sure to see how you forge out the dents and cracks in this already wrecked relationship, some kind of sledge hammer…
“The, I’ll lasso the moon, reach for the stars, climb a fucking mountain love.”…mmhh, yeah!
Your Duff is so adorable, sweet and caring and (as much as if one of those guys could be) innocent – maybe he is just the band-aid Izzy needs, maybe he is tearproof
enough to patch Izzy back together, like some kind of human-spider-silk. And maybe he is able to tangle his prey to cocoon, BITE and finally digest him.
Izzy/Nikki – Nikki/Izzy – just love the concept of this pairing…. Not many writers would come up with those two! Please, don’t take this for a vote! By all means, it is not! This paring has just some so Shakespeare-like-tragedy-quality-options in it (you already titled it) – they just can go down in a blaze ! (Or both of them could get sober – end up with wives…. whatever…)
Regardless which paring YOU chose (‘cause it’s YOUR choice! YOU are writing this – and YOU’re doing this great!) – I’m curious to see wherever YOU will lead!
*First: Thanx for bothering with my ramblings! Very kind of you to reply!
**Just my two pennies – I apologize for it to turning out to be a whole coin roll!
Author's responseI can't tell you how many times I've read your review. It's so detailed and thought out. The fact you pull out details from the different chapters literally made me jump up and down with happiness and you still give me the freedom to choose where to lead the story. I think I'm in fanfic heaven =) Please never apologize for the length of a review, I love all kinds no matter how short or long they are! I will try to update soon and Thank YOU So Much Again!! You're my rockstar
(#) The1000500100900 2013-02-26 10:38:50 PMHey, you girl, I just... Gosh. How can it be you can write so perfectly? Seriously. This story made me so far lough, cry, feel touched and so other wonderful feelings (or not when it comes to someone hurting Izzy :P) and it's just too amazing to even find words to describe. I love this chapter just as every previous ones! It felt somewhat different but still damn enjoyable.
And I am so so so so sorry for taking so long to read this, because I used to check every night if there was new chapter and now... I don't know, just stopped. Also I will end this las review, I promise!
Thank you so much for writing, continuing and being such a wonderful autor!!
Author's responseYour review just made my entire week! (and my week has been a rough one) Thank you so much for the kinds words. I am literally jumping up and down that my story has made you feel so many things and you continue to read and review it