- Another wonderful chapter. Some parts were slow, of course, but what story doesn't have a few slow parts? Although, I wish for a bit more commentating from the characters; after all, that is what these types of stories are for, right? To have an idea of what the characters would say if they knew about the HP books. I'd like to hear a bit more from the characters, if possible. However, when there are comments, I find them quite enjoyable. I especially like the comments from Fred & George. And of course Remus & Sirius. I can't wait until they get to the school and Sirius finally hears some of the astounding situations his only godson gets up to in his school days compared to the Marauders' school days. All in all, another great read. I'm looking forward to the next chapters. Update soon.
Author's responseI admit, whenever I first start a book or chapter for this, they do tend to start out slow. But the twins and the Marauders are of course my favorite (though you've probably noticed from all the comments they get!)
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