FOB... original drool over band for me. My head is like exploding.
- I am a fountain of emotions.
No, really... this chapter was really good. Christian's whole character and actions and stuff are written really well. And Jon, too. And how everyone was so comforting and they knew all the right things to do and say was nice, after all that darkness in the previous chapter.
Haha. Fall Out Boy. Ahh, okay, that was funny. And Brendon being a little motherfucker. That's similar to something I would write. :P
Ryan and Spencer bro time is cute. Aww.
Can't wait for the next chapter!
(#) MrsWayBeckett 2013-02-23 03:46:00 AMI really can't win with Christian!
I mean I love all your characters but I would've told Jon everything from the start and I would've told them about the whole Anna thing. Anna is a bitch! I'm sorry xD
I like her and I get that she has good intentions but she comes off as arogant and needy, selfish almost. Like Benjamin wasn't abusive enough to Chris and she has to get all up in there too! Bitch makes me mad.
I really like how Jon and Brendon are always there for her,but I have a feeling that when she tells them that secret they're maybe gonna turn their backs on her.
It just seems to me like Chris has a weird,submisive almost addictive personality, always got the same thing going on, that pattern,which in a personal sense is bad cause all she ever seems to do is get in trouble but in a writing sense its very good cause it's refreshing to get a character like her on here!
I like the mic in personalities you got going with the characters.It makes the story really exciting to read cause idk what the fuck's gonna happen next.
Anyway, this is just me voicing my thoughts because a rarelly do so.
I love this story!
I hope you update soon ! :D
(#) ReddyDevil 2013-02-23 03:51:23 AMSpencer and Ryan's 'date' made me grin and giggle so hard. Oh boys. (Spencer throwing the drumstick and hitting Brendon was just a classic! ;D)
This chapter was so emotional - for Christian, for Jon, for everyone, and you wrote it the way it needed to be written. Sometimes people dont play on emotion enough, and their characters can come seeming a bit robotic and cold-hearted, while others put too much emotion in and the readers pretty much drown in it while the characters are so emotional they sort of lose the plot. This was none of those. It was just perfect. I really love your Jon, I think he's amazingly sweet and perfect, dare I say it. Just, the way he's always there for Christian, and how he wants her to get better and overcome her fears, and ultimately Benjamin, is just... sighs
And I love Brendon's little comedic-relief section: "Fall Out Boy are back!" Fuck yeah, they are, and they're gonna take over the world. XD