by Zenathea
4 Reviews
Category: Harry Potter -
Rating: R - Genres: Drama,Fantasy - Characters: Harry,Lily -
Warnings: [!!!] [?] - Published: 2013/02/21 - Updated: 2013/02/21 - 4153 words
Reviews
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(#) banner 2013-02-21 11:36:16 AM
I liked the descriptions in this chapter. You managed to make me see it all, without feeling as if I'd been bogged down in detail.
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(#) raitono 2013-02-22 06:07:26 AM
I agree with banner. Your attention to detail is great. I only wish you hadn't included the last two paragraphs. It seems to be a good stopping point right as he pushes off the wall, where it ends now feels like it stops in the middle of a thought. Maybe it's just my preference though. Otherwise, good chapter. I'm really enjoying this story.
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(#) mrpietan 2013-02-23 06:45:12 AM
An excellent chapter and very appreciative to see it's posting. I look forward to the next installment.
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(#) TheResident 2013-03-03 01:47:59 PM
I have enjoyed this story to this point and eagerly look forward to future chapters. I find it unique and considering the amount of HP fanfiction I have read, that is a major accomplishment. Keep up the great work and I hope you will be able to update soon.