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DETERMINE MY HOPE? LOST IN MY DREAMS OF STATIC STEAM? YOU CAN'T HURT ME. I'VE DONE THAT. Could you tell these fucking Xs and Os to get out of my head??
(#) BipolarUnicorn 2013-02-25 11:33:34 AMDo you hear that? That is the sound of my jaw hitting the floor.
Like like like. Oh my gosh. This is so fucking amazing. You have such beautiful word choice and gah! I'm fangirling over here yo. This was gorgeous. Yeah now poems can be gorgeous and sexy. An this one is.
Author's responseThank you so much, man.
I think it's shit, but thanks dude!
(#) BipolarUnicorn 2013-02-26 02:18:11 AMNo no no nope s-sir. This is far from shit it's like a godly piece of work.
I love the summary part, "DETERMINE MY HOPE? LOSTIN MY DREAMS OF STATIC STEAM? YOU CAN'T HURT ME. I'VE DONE THAT." That really fucking spoke to me. I don't know.
Just nope this is amazing I love it. You motherfucker with the amazing poetry talent you son of a bitch. I love you.
Author's response..really? You really like it?
I don't know...I mean...I just feel so vague and cloudy and weird lately.
I dunno. It's probably nothing.
You're really too nice, dude...
(#) upinflames 2013-04-19 06:53:24 AMhey maybe sometime these obscurities will give away to a big reveal you never know. sometimes i wake up with a crick in my neck, pins and needles in my left feet, madam atom repeating over and over in her grand crescendo "everything is space, time, and energy" and i'd think of every thought that took space in my head, all the time i've wasted trying to figure myself out, energy wasted on the absence of anything - it writes words like this; i just hope you're not like me, in the way that i do wish you were (or are) - selfishly, i'd wish i wouldn't feel so alone with never being alone
but think again to be sure i'm making sure you're aware of brilliance and how iridescence is something you can't let go of
(i don't think i even tried to make sense, i'm sorry, i have many feelings about this piece)
Author's responseIt's like, this very strange feeling that makes me elated/complete/ready/alltheseothersadwonders whenever I hear from you, in any form. It's like, the same when I listen to 'Wot's...uh the deal' by Pink Floyd...if that helps at all.
Sometimes when we don't try to make sense, someone goes oh, hey, i get that!
Thank you, AZ, my friend (is it cool if I call you that?). For making sense and for bring the feels back...it's quite easy to get lost in the land of numbness.
(#) upinflames 2013-04-19 11:06:29 PMcall me anything you'd like, i wouldn't be able to stop you or anything, y'know? thanks for asking though.
Roger Waters, man. ever see The Wall? that movie is just... you really shouldn't watch if you're already feeling down. sad, sad movie of a sad sad life. i think it's on youtube if you got the time. bucket list that shit.
Author's responseHah, okay. Thanks, friend.
Roger Waters, dude! Empty Spaces...
Old Pink at the funny farm...
'Course I've got the time, not the mindframe recently. It's been sitting on top of my VCR for about five months...I think tonight's as good as any night to watch it. I'm almost positive my brain will be mindbusted for life after I watch it.