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Don't Hang Up

Pinpoint a moment where someone's life is changed. Although it's just a memory, probably nothing more, you can't even come up with the slightest hint of one.

Category: Drama - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama - Characters:  - Published: 2013/01/13 - Updated: 2013/01/13 - 1218 words

Reviews

• Don't Hang Up

  (#) waycest 2013-01-13 03:39:19 PM

  ouch that is the second depressing thing I've read in the timespan of 5 minutes.
  
  excuse me while I go puke up my heart
  
  (That random jabber can be translated into: "That was really good! shocking, sad, but good).

  Author's response

  Thanks for the translation. I would've assumed puking up a heart would be quite the dreary sight.
  
  THANK YOU, THOUGH. I felt a little...ouch while I was writing it. It's the first thing I've written with an ending. THANK YOU! What was the first most depressing thing you read?

• Don't Hang Up

  (#) Mirazal 2013-01-13 03:42:56 PM

  Oh my gosh, dear.
  This is fucking sad and beautiful and I just don't know what to do with myself right now.
  
  You're- squints at you - a fantastic writer.

  Author's response

  M!!!
  
  You're back! Or maybe I'm just the one who's back...
  
  In ANY case; thank you so much...I just...gahhh. I'm so awful at responding to compliments.
  
  I felt kidna strange writing it. So, thank you, m'dear, for your words.
  
  I really don't think of myself as much of anything...maybe I'll have to be a better writer now that you said that.

• Don't Hang Up

  (#) BipolarUnicorn 2013-01-13 03:50:27 PM

  Oh my. Well, I love this. As I do all of your other stuff.
  
  This was just so /beautiful/. (That god damn italic better fucking work.) This is amazing, it made my heart break and I was a bit shocking and sad, but nonetheless it was amazing.
  
  You are an amazing writer my friend.

  Author's response

  Awhhhhhhhhhhhh!
  
  Why are you so nice? I'm sorry I broke your heart...it honestly wasn't intentional.
  
  Maybe I should start calling myself a writer...I don't know, man. It's like...if Allen Ginsberg and Kurt Vonnegut and Fannie Flagg are writers...how the fuck do I qualify?
  
  Oh, and I figured out something about the italics.
  
  They won't work if you put a period or something else in between the /
  
  Like, ghost.
  
  and /ghost/.
  
  See, man? Won't work...it thinks it's like, a link or something...

• Don't Hang Up

  (#) waycest 2013-01-13 03:51:58 PM

  The Blood Pen. It still should be in 'Recent Stories'. It was good. Hit home.

  Author's response

  Ahmygod.
  
  I must go tell Mirazal my feels. Thanks for pointing it out.

• Don't Hang Up

  (#) OhmyGee 2013-01-13 04:32:17 PM

  Ahhhhhhhggg.
  
  I am whining because that is probably in my top five favorites now.
  
  You are SUCH an fantastic writer!!!
  
  :D

  Author's response

  DONNIE DONNIEEEEEEEEEEEEE.
  
  FIRSTLY, I AM TERRIBLY SORRY THAT I HAVE NOT RESPONDED YET. MY COMPUTER IS INCREDIBLY OLD, THEREFOR, INCREDIBLY SLOW AND IT HAS UPCHUCKED LIVE.COM FOR THE FIFTEENTH TIME. AND SEEMS AS THOUGH IT WILL ONLY HANDLE WORD '03 AND FICWAD/FANFICTION.NET YES I HAVE A SUPER FULL LIFE. PLEEEEEEEEEEEASE FORGIVE ME, D DAWG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  
  And on a side note: that was a whine? Looks kind of perverted... XD
  
  But...
  
  Ahhhhhhhhhhggg.
  
  Whyyyyyyyyy you gotta make me all blushy? You have to know you're so boss at writing. Seriously, you freak me out. How the hell can you make your chapters so long and interesting?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!
  
  It amazes and terrifies me.

• Don't Hang Up

  (#) upinflames 2013-01-13 09:18:25 PM

  I liked it. I liked it a lot.
  
  -az

  Author's response

  Ahmygoodness. Thanks, dude!
  
  :D

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