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Can't You See?

by MCR-99 1 Reviews

Another song. I haven't written it down,not planned it.Just popped into my head randomly..

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama,Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2013/03/18 - Updated: 2013/03/18 - 335 words


Can't You See?

Just a friend,and nothing more.
That's what you tell me.
But,I don't want to be just a friend.
I want to be something more.

Can't you see how much I love you?
Can't you see I really care?
Can't you see how much I need you?
I know you love and need me too.

How can you not ever tell?
How much I love and need you?
I leave hints,like all the time.
You just don't see them,do you?

Can't you see how much I love you?
Can't you see I really care?
Can't you see how much I need you?
I know you love and need me too.

Can't you see,my true feelings?
Can't you see I want you bad?
Can't you see,it kills me inside?
When you're not around?

I really mean this,can't you see?
I'm telling you,it's real.
Don't ever fight it,how hard you try.
It's love,it's a need.

Can't you see how much I love you?
Can't you see I really care?
Can't you see how much I need you?
I know you love and need me too.

Can't you see,my true feelings?
Can't you see I want you bad.
Can't you see,it kills me inside?
When you're not around?

Can't you see,what I feel?
I know you feel it too.
Can't you see,it's really real?
You know it's real too.

So,urm.
Was that good?
I just made it up on the spot by the way,so I don't mind if you don't like it..
I kind of got inspired by Sleeping With Sirens' song Stomach Tied In Knots,and wanted to use the chorus,but I thought I'd better not,because I've already been called a stealer of something cough from Terrabau5 cough
But,I won't let it get to me :)
PS:I'll be using this in my SWS fic too,that's what I wrote this for :)
Rate and Review! xx Sadie
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