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Not A Care in the World, 'Cause Our Hearts Are Full of Holes

And oh, the pretty things we could do if we weren't all dead. Hush, now, my little dove...sleep, fall awake...run away to another broken home. It's all you've got. **Critics/helpers for ending!**

Category: Drama - Rating: G - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2013/03/20 - Updated: 2013/03/20 - 1217 words

Reviews

• Not A Care in the World, 'Cause Our Hearts Are Full of Holes

  (#) Mirazal 2013-03-20 12:33:40 AM

  Wow, this is really fucking good, Rah Rah.
  
  But how much more are you gonna add? You can't just wrap it up there after that, this is really great!

  Author's response

  Is it? Ohhhhh, I've been killing myself in the process of making it! XD
  
  I was just going to add a bit more. But I DON'T KNOW HOW TO FUCKING FINISH THE GODDAMN THING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  
  Oh, and I'm really sorry for not responding to your email. I've been super busy with sleeping for 24 hours a day... :P
  
  This is for a class I'm taking and now I'm stuck on the ending and it was due...yesterday. D:
  
  Wish me luck, dude.

• Not A Care in the World, 'Cause Our Hearts Are Full of Holes

  (#) BipolarUnicorn 2013-03-20 01:54:37 AM

  Oh god, I was just about to get off but then ibsaw this. I'm speechless. Holy shit dude. That was amazing. I wish I could tell you how to finish it, bit at the moment I sadly can't. I don't have any ideas or anything anyway. My mind is like washed up. Sucked dry and now lifeless. But anyways this is ohmygod. I cant even begin to describe how amazing this is Rah Rah.
  
  And by the way, I'm still going to try to work on the story even though I can't be onthe Internet often. Bur yeah.
  
  I gie you the luck of a thousand leprechauns., to finish this. Cause it's so fuckinf fabulous.
  
  Abbie xx

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