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Chapter 36: Target Rin
Naruto is given a scroll containing the secrets of making women fall for him, a scroll he uses at first on the women around him but soon on the shinobi world as a whole, giving birth to the Ero-ninja.
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Eroninja
(#) LeafRanger5 2013-03-27
Wow. and so now Rin is in the mix. and you're going to break the fanfic into a two parter? interesting. Most interesting.
Hopefully though we won't get anymore of naruto's girls almost getting raped. Like tayuya.
Keep up the good work man!Eroninja
(#) pokemaster12 2013-03-27
This was an excellently done chapter. And with this, I can't help but feel both Joseki and Danzou's days are numbered.
One thing I am curious about is whether or not Rin's loss of memories will adversely effect Naruto and Tsunade's attempt to take Danzou down.
I also hope you resolve the issue between Naruto and Kiyomi. I'll be honest, I'm a little biased, but Kiyomi is my favorite of all Naruto's girls. I've just got a thing for Naru/Kyu.
One thing you may want to do as well is focus some attention on the other girls that, while maybe not important to the main plot right now, are still out there doing what they can to help. We haven't heard from the likes of Tayuya, Koyuki, Kin, or any of the other girls for a while.Eroninja
(#) Fanficreader71 2013-03-27
Great chapter, I enjoyed reading your latest update and I will be looking forward to reading your next update.Eroninja
(#) BlackRevenant 2013-03-27
I'm wondering if the pesudo incest with Naruto's mom is a way to appease the people that want her in the harem.
Holy shit you made the mist kunoichi into the goddamned Hanya Of The North!
Interesting.
RevEroninja
(#) n0mster 2013-03-27
As always, another fantastic chapter, great to see Rin finally leave the clutches of those who used her simply as a disposable pawn, and for her to finally know some degree of happiness and love with Naruto. Also it seems like Kushina is slowly but surely succumbing to Naruto's charms, seems like his natural charisma and personality (and his great skill in love-making) is winning even her over, haha.
Definitely looking forward to your next chapter.Eroninja
(#) bakapervert 2013-03-27
Thanks for the update. Good job with rearranging the canon and fitting it into your story. The plot Danzo and Joseki make here is pretty well done and explain pretty well how Rin fit into your story. Great job with that.
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