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Rocket Queen Part 1

by SADIS 5 Reviews

“Cool!” Slash said then blushed slightly. “Uh I’ll give you my address you should totally come! Oh uh not co-uh you know come by and jam with us.”

Category: Guns n' Roses - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Angst,Humor,Romance - Characters:  - Published: 2013/03/30 - Updated: 2013/03/30 - 1566 words

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  • Concrete Jungle Gym

    (#) GNR01Fan 2013-03-30 02:04:36 PM

    Great, i adore Steven in this one, can't wait for more!

    Author's response

    Thank you! Really happy to hear you liked Steven. He's always fun to write =)
  • Concrete Jungle Gym

    (#) shadowvt125 2013-03-31 06:47:49 PM

    Rocket Queen Part 1
    or Gone with the wind =).
    Steven has this whirlewind attitude (favorite line: "Bad skateboard, bad."
    and Slash is heavily blown away by a certain doozy 'blond' bass.
    Again some very vivid pictures in this chapter, I liked the confetti and the paper plane.
    Just a suggestion: Maybe you consider to change the Sex Pistols CD to a record or an album - The stroy is spuposes to tkake place around 1985, isn`t it? So I think vinyl was more common back then.
    I'll keep sailing along!



    Author's response

    Lol, I've actually never seen Gone with the Wind, but thank you for that comparison :)

    And a big thank you for catching that CD to Album suggestion! I get so wrapped up in the descriptions and what the characters are doing I sometimes forget the time it takes place :3
  • Concrete Jungle Gym

    (#) Billyboy 2013-04-01 04:15:57 PM

    Oh wow what the fuck is this!?
    (I enjoyed to read it xD ) I didn't expect this. Looking forward to see were this will go.

    Well well. will be intresting to see how they will react on everyone.
    Damn! looking forward!

    Author's response

    Lol, this is my Duff/Slash/Steven subplot since it is mostly an Axl/Izzy story. I'm glad you enjoyed reading this chapter though. :3

    Thank you!
  • Concrete Jungle Gym

    (#) AppetiteforAxl 2013-04-01 08:19:57 PM

    you should definitely continue with this, especially the cute Sluff stuff :3

    Author's response

    Yeah, thank you so much!! I had toyed with the idea of cutting the Sluff, but if you keep reading/reviewing I'll keep it ;)

    Thanks for the review =)
  • Concrete Jungle Gym

    (#) niceboys 2013-04-02 06:54:58 PM

    No squeeeee..... or awwwww.... from me for this chapter. (and the whole fic so far)
    Just a solid RESPECT and admiration for your WORK. I like this and I enjoy this every time I am loggin in here. Far from PREDICTIABLE. I wish I were able to write somthing like that.
    Keep on surprising me!

    Author's response

    Oh my dear, thank you so much for your compliments on my writing

    Also if you have some spare time and would like an unpredictable (in my opinion) and similar writing style please check out my other chapter fic Challenge.

    Hopefully there will be a squee/awww moment for you in one of the upcoming chapters :3

    Thanks again for the reviews

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