“Cool!” Slash said then blushed slightly. “Uh I’ll give you my address you should totally come! Oh uh not co-uh you know come by and jam with us.”
(#) shadowvt125 2013-03-31 06:47:49 PMRocket Queen Part 1
or Gone with the wind =).
Steven has this whirlewind attitude (favorite line: "Bad skateboard, bad."
and Slash is heavily blown away by a certain doozy 'blond' bass.
Again some very vivid pictures in this chapter, I liked the confetti and the paper plane.
Just a suggestion: Maybe you consider to change the Sex Pistols CD to a record or an album - The stroy is spuposes to tkake place around 1985, isn`t it? So I think vinyl was more common back then.
I'll keep sailing along!
Author's responseLol, I've actually never seen Gone with the Wind, but thank you for that comparison :)
And a big thank you for catching that CD to Album suggestion! I get so wrapped up in the descriptions and what the characters are doing I sometimes forget the time it takes place :3
- Oh wow what the fuck is this!?
(I enjoyed to read it xD ) I didn't expect this. Looking forward to see were this will go.
Well well. will be intresting to see how they will react on everyone.
Damn! looking forward!
Author's responseLol, this is my Duff/Slash/Steven subplot since it is mostly an Axl/Izzy story. I'm glad you enjoyed reading this chapter though. :3
(#) AppetiteforAxl 2013-04-01 08:19:57 PMyou should definitely continue with this, especially the cute Sluff stuff :3
Author's responseYeah, thank you so much!! I had toyed with the idea of cutting the Sluff, but if you keep reading/reviewing I'll keep it ;)
Thanks for the review =)
- No squeeeee..... or awwwww.... from me for this chapter. (and the whole fic so far)
Just a solid RESPECT and admiration for your WORK. I like this and I enjoy this every time I am loggin in here. Far from PREDICTIABLE. I wish I were able to write somthing like that.
Keep on surprising me!
Author's responseOh my dear, thank you so much for your compliments on my writing
Also if you have some spare time and would like an unpredictable (in my opinion) and similar writing style please check out my other chapter fic Challenge.
Hopefully there will be a squee/awww moment for you in one of the upcoming chapters :3
Thanks again for the reviews