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Screaming

by lolhai 6 Reviews

I am screaming.

Category: Horror - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Horror - Characters:  - Warnings: [V] - Published: 2013/03/30 - Updated: 2013/03/30 - 207 words

Reviews

  • Screaming

    (#) BloodyAbattoir 2013-04-24 02:33:31 AM

    This is pretty good and I particularly like the mind-fuck twist at the end. I would like to see how you develop as a writer.
  • Screaming

    (#) BeccaIsNotOnFire 2013-06-28 05:27:17 PM

    Holy shit this was bloody amazing. You clearly have a lot of talent.
  • Screaming

    (#) SyraStrange 2013-06-29 03:24:54 AM

    Ouroboros? That's the first idea that comes to mind. But wow. Just. Wow. The imagery was there without it sounding overdone and you just made so much happen in, shit, about 200 words? That is amazing. Kudos, man.

    -S

    Author's response

    Thank you!
  • Screaming

    (#) MCR-99 2013-06-30 09:31:07 AM

    Dude. This is epic.
    Scary.

    This belongs in a movie or something.
  • Screaming

    (#) xXchickenwithatacoXx 2013-07-10 01:53:01 AM

    This. This is fucking awesome. It was all like mindfuck and shit and I loved it.

    xx Kitty
  • Screaming

    (#) Spongebrains 2014-02-16 06:00:48 PM

    Edgar Allen Poe level shit here.

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