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Me being angsty. You know the feeling. (Reposted in this category now)
Wow it's been a hell of a week. I started it feeling hurt, angry, confused, betrayed, sad, hopeless.. but now I feel okay.
Well I'm still unbelievably sad that this has happened, and I'd give anything to have Mcr back.. but we have to stay strong and remember what the message was in the first place. To not give up, to keep fighting, and to be ourselves!
So I'm trying not to sound like a total hypocrite here- I wrote this poem at the start of the week, when I was angry and upset and confused. And even though i'm feeling okay right now and in general i'm trying to not think like this anymore, to me this poem is still true.
I know it's not very good, but it's just what I felt, and any feedback would be appreciated. :)
Is it really so strange
that I'm disenchanted
with this life
this meaningless expanse of time
this desperate race
to get to the end
of something we're told to make the most of
it's all we've got
but is something better than
freedom from pain