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Surprise, Surprise.

by electricviolence 5 Reviews

You gave up when you failed to fly.

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG-13 - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2013/04/15 - Updated: 2013/04/15 - 65 words - Complete

Reviews

  • Surprise, Surprise.

    (#) AlexisSCREAM 2013-04-15 12:49:16 AM

    This is amazing. Seriously.

    xoxo

    Author's response

    Thank you. < 3
  • Surprise, Surprise.

    (#) beatus_quinn 2013-04-15 02:35:13 AM

    why would you be nervous I mean this is really amazing and sad and beautiful

    Author's response

    Umm. Thank you. You're really sweet.
  • Surprise, Surprise.

    (#) LaurentheHuman 2013-04-15 03:32:08 AM

    so incredibly talented, you are.

    Author's response

    Thank you, sweet thang.
  • Surprise, Surprise.

    (#) HatedEyes 2013-04-17 12:07:58 PM

    I just want to fall in a heap and cry, y'know?
    Why aren't I this good???????

    Author's response

    You're better. Shhh.
  • Surprise, Surprise.

    (#) drtylttlscrt 2013-11-12 10:32:55 PM

    Wow, this is absolutely incredible!

    Also, would I be right in saying it's about an anxious person who masks sadness until all they feel is hate?

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