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Thinking.

by electricviolence 4 Reviews

Fixed it.

Category: Poetry - Rating: PG-13 - Genres:  - Characters:  - Published: 2013/05/04 - Updated: 2013/10/13 - 131 words - Complete

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  • Thinking.

    (#) MCR-99 2013-05-04 08:16:21 AM

    HAPPY STAR WARS DAY.

    Sorry. Just had to say it.

    Anyway, I love this dude, like seriously stop being this epic vortex of poetry because how in heck will I be able to keep up?

    Wait, no. Don't stop. Oh shit, MCR lyric mode engaged.

    Don't stop if I fall and don't look back..

    Oh jeez.

    xoxox Sadie

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  • Thinking.

    (#) Car_Drive_Flashbacks 2013-10-14 12:44:53 AM

    I honestly absolutely loved this poem... I couldn't stop rereading it.

    And try not to let things get you down,control you. Especially when you get stuck on thoughts of a doom future.

    ~Keep on writting
  • Thinking.

    (#) Mirazal 2013-10-14 05:19:55 AM

    I see someone has been having deep thoughts and stuff lately. Just reminding you that it's okay to feel like this.

    You're still young. You don't have to have it all figured out right now. Also, some good news: Pope Francis has mentioned how the Christian agenda against gay people is stupid and we need to be more accepting, so if any of your Christian family/friends/neighbors/etc are condemning you for not being straight or any other opinions you have, fuck those people.

    I like to think that there's something there for us in the end, considering that humans are complex beings with "free will" and thoughts and emotions and how could this all come together by accident? That's just me though.

    Ah, what if the world is even more fucked up later on. Ellie, we are literally the future. The world is in a terrible state right now, but as the next generation we are going to make things right. I have faith in you and all the people I've met and in the kids right now who want to see a change in the world.

    Sorry for rambling and stuff, I just feel really emotional, ha. I love you, Ellie. You know, you can email me about stuff like this because I'm scared too, and maybe we can face it together.
  • Thinking.

    (#) AmericanHorrorStory 2013-10-14 08:06:59 AM

    I'm so proud of you, Elie. Fuck. You're such a fucking amazing author and an even better friend - you mean a lot to me, girly.

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