Archie still trying to chouse, looks to Atlanta for insperation on what to do
(#) Coffeebean 2006-08-02 03:15:01 PM
Good ending,couldent of done it better myself,loved how you saved both,the only reson i said lynn should die is cause Archie and atlanta are MEANT FOR EACH OTHER!!!
I'm with you. Letting Lynn die with out even thinking about it would just have been cruel. I am so relived that both of them are alright!
Gummy Bears take keyboard**
We thought we would show off another new thing we learned in boot camp. Here we go! This has to be our favorite line in the whole story.
"Just one problem Cronus" Archie said as him and the two girls advanced, corning him "None of us are fools"
Thanks, i thought that line was funny to
(#) RebornFireBird 2006-08-02 10:19:37 PM
Ya that would be a little harsh. Anyhow, things worked and life is good! I'm sad that it's over though...
i really enjoyed this story,it was exciting and i knew what was happening at all times.!!!GREAT JOB!!!
(#) mystic 2006-08-05 09:54:39 PM
That was totally wicked.Excellent work on this story.
(#) atlanta 2006-08-11 07:59:54 AM
i really liked it and it should become a episode and if it dose i will tap it and wach it over and over again.